Once in a little town a lived a little girl with beautiful blond hair. Next door lived a naughty fairy. The little girl's family were poor and had no money or food but the naughty fairy had food and money. So the Dad secretly went to the naughty fairy's house to steal some food. The fairy caught the Dad and she said in a wicked voice, " WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY GARDEN?"
The Dad said in paniced voice, "If my family can have some food from you, you can have our daughter."
"OK, Give me the child this instant." the fairy rudely said.
So the Mum was in tears, but the Dad gave their daughter to the fairy and she said "Goodbye" and slammed the door shut.
As time went on, the daughter grew into a teenager and grew very long golden hair which she brushed all day, everyday. It was hard for her to this because it was knotty. The naughty Fairy said, "I am growing old now, and you must look after the house".
"OK" said the golden haired teenager. Soon the fairy died in her chair....
The Girl said "Wow, now I can see my Mum and Dad again." And she set off for her parents house.
When she got there a strange man appeared at the door, his name was Niwa. The girl said in a rushed voice, "I used to live here.'The man at the door said "The people that used to live here have died."
She cried and cried all day. The man tried to look after her while she was so sad. "What is your name?" he said.
"Rapunzel, " she said.
" I will look after you for the rest of your life," he said.
Rapunzel felt so happy that someone was looking after her, "thank you!" she said.
Rapunzel and the man lived happily ever after.
The End.
What a great story Quanah. I was transfixed the whole time I read it. It also reminded me of Jack and The Beanstalk, how the family were so poor that they had to make a sacrifice for food. It was so sad that by the time she returned home that her family had died. Do you think they died of a broken heart?
ReplyDeleteLove it Quanah, great to see your writing up here. Will there be a part 2 to this story?
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